Need advice

This is a page from my first ever Manga/graphic novel of any sorts, it's titled "Letshwalo" I just needed some advice on what you think, what I should improve, focuse on, or do, anything is welcomed, I also drew this on paper with pen as I don't have any digital gadgets like tablets, I did use photoshop to do the text but yeah let me know, thank you in advance 🙏🏾 🙏🏾